tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806472936444350204.post8832130182582865405..comments2023-04-03T05:46:20.687-04:00Comments on WE'LL FIGURE IT OUT ONCE WE GET MORE DOWN: Chewing Gum, Infidelity and IdiosyncrasiesAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05501505182602312372noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6806472936444350204.post-79805047348704766582011-05-24T17:49:10.767-04:002011-05-24T17:49:10.767-04:00You always begin your pieces with such strength - ...You always begin your pieces with such strength - I could taste the chewing gum analogy. It left me dry. I also very much enjoyed the pacing of this work, particularly in the third paragraph. The words, "we smile," stabbed at me like the tone of a sole piano key being jabbed at. Repeatedly. You are a master of literary staccato, you. I WANT MORE!Scottnoreply@blogger.com